短文改错专练
短文改错(每题共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，
在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
1
This is a story told by my father: “When I was boy, 76.___________
the most exciting thing was when to celebrate the Spring 77. ___________
Festival. My grandma was the best cooker in the world 78. ___________
but could make the most delicious dishes. One time, I just 79. ___________
couldn’t wait for the Spring Festival dinner. As I was 80. ___________
about take a piece from a cooked duck, I saw Grandma in 81. ___________
the kitchen looking at me. Shake her head, she said, ‘ It 82. ___________
isn't a good time to do that, dear.’ At once I apologize 83. ___________
and controlled me at my best till the dinner started. You 84. ___________
know, that was a dinner we had waited for several month.” 85. ___________
2
Friendship is importance. Everyone needs friendship. In all 76.
our lives we can’t live without friendship just like we can’t 77.
live without air and water. Friendship makes us getting on 78.
well with one another to go ahead under different kind of 79.
difficulties in front of us. But real friendship is easy to 80.
come by, True friendship must be sincerely and be based 81.
on understand each other but not on benefits of each 82.
other. A good friend can always be a good teacher to us. 83.
By his advice we are persuading to go the right way. Therefore 84.
more friends we have, the better we can improve ourselves. 85.
3
Not all people like to work and everyone likes to play. All over 91. _______
the world men and woman , boys and girls enjoy sports . Since 92. _______
long ago , many adults and children called their friends together 93. _______
to spend hours , even days play games . One of the reasons why people 94. _______
like to play is that sports help them to live happily . In other words, 95. _______
they help to keep people strongly and feeling good . When people are 96. _______
playing games, they move a lot. That is how sports are good activities 97. _______
for their health .Having fun with their friends make them happy. 98. _______
Many people enjoy sports by watch others play. In American 99. _______
big cities, thousands sell tickets to watch football or basketball games. 100 _______
4
Last week life didn’t look very well for heart transplant patient. 76.
Barry Brooks from London. He was told six month ago that he would 77.
need the operation if he is to survive. He immediately planned to make 78.
the across Atlantic journey to the hospital in Chicago to have the 79.
operation on. While he was in transit（中转）at JFK airport in New York,80.
he received the news that his new heart had accidentally transported 81.
to other hospital. Barry then had to get on a different plane to 82.
convey him to the other hospital, there the operation was carried. 83.
out in time. Barry is now gradually recovering from the transplant. 84.
but he told us,“I feel like being a new man-this new heart has” 85.
changed my life.”
5
Have you ever asked you why children 76.
go to school? You’ll probably say that they 77.
go to learn their native languages and other 78.
languages, physics, geography, history or all 79.
the other subject. That’s quite true, but 80.
why they learn these things? And are these 81.
things all what they learn at school? 82.
There is much in school education than 83.
just learning knowledge. We go school, above 84.
all, to learn how to learn, so that when we’ll 85.
finish school, we can continue to learn.
6
The Chinese diet is the healthy in the world. 61.
It contains lots of fruit and green vegetables. 62.
It's high at fibre and low in sugar and fat. 63.
But the western diet contains too many 64.
fat and sugar in form of creams, cakes and so on. 65.
Because this, westerners very easily 66.
put to weight. As a result, scores of people 67.
die from heart illness, some suffer from 68.
bad teeth. So the doctor suggests us not 69.
to do that. We'd better to eat our healthy food. 70.
7
Dear classmates
,
Now I’d like to tell you why I learn
English.
1.
I often read English aloud and try learn
something 2.
important by hearts , which helps me remember it easily and 3.
form the good habit of thinking in English 4.
I listen to a lot and talk with others in English
. 5.
In this way , I was improved both my
hearing 6.
and my spoken English.
I keep a diary in English every day but
my 7.
spoken English is becoming better and
better. 8.
I also try my best to master the necessary grammar
knowledge. By this means , I can express
itself 9.
in English correct . That’s the way I have been
learning 10.
English . I hope it will be useful to you .
That’s all . Thank you.
8
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to tell you a piece of excited news: 76.___________
I won first place in the Spoken English Competition of 77.___________
our city . The achievement that I made it is due to your 78.____________
kind help. You spent so much time help me with my spoken 79.__________
English that I made rapid progress, I remember you advice 80.___________
" Speak slowly and clearly. " Thank you very much all your time 81.____________
and advice . I heard that you and your wife will visit 82.___________
our school before long. I'm very glad and look forward to 83._________
see you. I sent you a telescope as a small gift. 84._________
Please check the mail and I hope you will like them. 85._________
Yours
Li Ming
9
Nowadays more and more people, specially schoolboys and schoolgirls, are 76_____
give to video games. Many of them spend all of their spare time 77_____
to the games, and some even stay at the game machines all day 78_____
long. The reason is that they can enrich their lives as well as 79_____
knowledge by playing video games. But it’s a good way of relaxing 80_____
after a day’s work and study , as video games can bring a fun to 81_____
people’s life. However, on the other hand , play video games too 82_____
much can waste time and money, and has an ill effect on 83_____
people’s eyesight and healthy .So, video games, like coins, have two sides. 84_____
The key point is that we should make of the games properly. 85_____
10
Henry Royce did not like his car, that ran badly and often 76.
broke down. So he decided to make a best car himself, 77.
and in 1904 he produced his first new model. Charles Rolls, 78.
a car maker, was very interested in Royce' s car, but soon 79.
Rolls and Royce go into business together. One of their first 80.
model was the Silver Ghost. In 1907, a Silver Ghost broke the 81.
world’s record by drive 14,371 miles without breaking down 82.
once. After the drive, it was cost just over ￡ 2 to put the car 83.
back into perfect condition. This is not surprising that the Silver 84.
Ghost was regarded “the best car in the world”. 85.
11
Most
families in China hoped their single children will 61. ______
have a happy future, so they are very strict in their children. 62. ______
So do teachers in schools! Many children are given so much 63.
______
homework that they have hardly any spare time have sports. 64.
______
The children are forbidden to do anything but to study. No 65. ______
wonder so many children are tired of lessons. Some even 66. ______
attack or kill his parents and teachers! I believe many people 67.
______
already read this kind of news in newspapers or magazines. 68. ______
Shouldn’t we draw lesson from the accidents? Now our 69. ______
government is carry out a plan to solve the education problems. 70. ______
12
One day, on her way school, Li Lan found a small bag 76._____________
near a bus station. She opened it and found a lot of money 77._____________
as soon as a calling card inside. From the calling card, she 78.______________
invented the owner’s address and his telephone number. 79._____________
She thought the owner must very worried. So she went 80._____________
to the public telephones and called the owner. Then she 81._____________
waited for the bus station. The owner came by taxi very 82._____________
soon, and Li Lan gave the bag to him. The owner is so grateful 83._____________
to her that he took out from 100 yuan to reward Li Lan, 84._____________
But Li Lan polite refused it and went on to school. 85._____________
13
Fishing is my favorite sport. I often fished for 76.________________
hour without catching anything, but this doesn’t worry 77. ________________
me. Some fishermen are unlucky. Instead catching fish, 78. ________________
they catch old boots and rubbish. I’m even less luck. I 79.________________
never catch everything—even old boots after having 80. ________________
spent a whole morning on the river. So I always go home 81. ________________
with empty bag. “You should give up fishing,” my friends 82. ________________
say, “It’s a waste time.” But they don’t realize one 83. ________________
important thing. I’m not real interested in fishing. I’m 84. ________________
only interested in sitting in a boat and do nothing at all. 85. ________________
14
Life is made up from success and failure. No 76. ______
one is always success and also no one is always a 77.______
failure. So it doesn’t make much different 78.______
whether you are successful or not. The most 79._-____
important thing is simply that you do before your success 80.______
or failure. If you lost heart when you fail 81.______
or show proud when you succeed, you will 82.______
never succeed. Instead, you should face to it 83.______
bravely and keep up with your courage when you 84.______
success, and then your failure can be changed into success.85.____
15
I went to the Summer Palace last week. At the gate
I happened to meet some American tourists. I greeted to 76.______
them in English and then we began to chat. I got know 77.______
that they were college students travel in China. Most of 78.______
them were found of Chinese medicine. They are busy taking 79.______
pictures and were much impressed with the changes that 80.______
had been taken place in the past few years as well. After 81.______
that, we went boating on a lake and having a good time. 82.______
We exchanged our email address so that we could write to 83.______
each other in future. They thanked us again and again. I 84.______
was very glad to have a chance to practicing my oral English. 85.______
16
Tom and Dick are next door neighbor who both 76. ____
work in same office. They often walk together to and 77. ____
from work. Once they were walking to home together 78. ____
while it suddenly started to rain. Tom quickly opened 79. ____
his umbrella and said proud, “My wife really was great 80. ____
foresight. She said this morning it would rain and tell 81. ____
me to carry my umbrella.” Dick smiled and walked 82. ____
up to him under the protection of the umbrella, said, 83. ____
“Mine has even great foresight. She didn’t let me 84. ____
carry one as she knew you’d share yours with you.” 85. ____
17
Before he was a teacher , Bob told me what he 76 ___________
would like to be a lawyer when he was at school . 77 ___________
He worked very hard in his lessons and tried to 78___________
enter into a famous university , but something unhappy 79 ___________
happened in his family , which make necessary for him 80___________
to make for a living . As a young man , he had been a 81___________
bus driver ,a dustman and a salesman .But he spends his 82 ___________
spare time studying and finally becoming a college 83___________
teacher . “Young people,” he often said ,“full of wishes 84 ___________
and dreams before they step into the society” 85 ___________
18
As is known , that is interesting to teach children to 76__________
swim while they are still babies . Most the large towns in 77 __________
Florida and California have already run particularly lessons for 78__________
babies . The idea has quickly spread to Europe from where, 79__________
in several countries , special courses are now offered to 80 __________
he children who are from 7 to 24 month old . 81 __________
The first step is to have child get rid of fear of 82 __________
water . Next , he is teaching to float in water . Once he 83__________
can do that naturally and can swim with fear , the child can 84__________
master the technique and push him forward through the water. 85__________
19(2005广东卷)
I’ve really got to do something to lose weight because
I’m getting much too fat．I wasn’t worried about it until l go 76.______
to see the doctor．He told me that I’d probably had a heart 77. ______
attack while l started eating less．When you’re on a diet you 78. ______
have to stop eat too much even though you are always hungry． 79. ______
They may be very hard to do and you certainly need a lot 80. ______
of will-power to succeed．So I will stay on a health farm for a 81. ______
month 1 won’t be able to eat much and so I’ll have to stick 82. ______
to my diet．I’ll also do plenty of exercise，which won’t give 83. ______
me any harm too．Both the diet and the exercise will 84. ______
help me to lose weight and feel more better． 85. ______
20
There are advantage for students to work while 76. __________
studying at school. One of them was that 77. __________
they can earn money. For the most part, 78. __________
students working to earn money for their own 79. __________
use. Earning their own money allow them 80. __________
to spend on anything as if they please. 81. __________
They would have to ask their parents for 82. __________
money or for permission to do things by 83. __________
the money. Some students may also to save 84. __________
up for our college or future use. 85. __________
21
My sister found a bird on the roadside. We named him
Jack and keep him for about three years. He would greet us 76.________
in a tree outside our bedroom, calling "Hello" as we lay in 77.________
bed in a morning. He also passed "Hello" to the cats when 78._______
they came into the room. We often played a trick on himself. 79._______
We'd throw a coin as far as possibly. Jack would fly away 80._______
and bring it back for us throw again. He would also catch 81._______
the food throwing to him from the other side of the room and 82._______
sing happily. But for the most wonderful thing about Jack 83.________
were his musical ability. Leaving him at home all day, we 84._______
would return at night to hear that he'd picked up from the 85._______
radio in the day.
22
My car just wouldn’t move any further .It was complete 76．________
dead,and I was a few miles far away from anywhere on a cold, 77．_______
wet night .I decided walk around a little before accepting I’d 78．_______
have to spend the night in the car .Maybe I can find a 79．________
telephone .Actually ,I didn’t have to walk far before I 80．________
found a small house standing on a field with a light 81．________
shone from the sitting room .I knocked at the door and 82．________
was delighting when a pleasant old man opened the 83．________
door but listened to my story carefully .He said he had 84．________
no telephone, and it wasn’t’ one within walking distance, 85．________
but offered to come and look at my car.
23(2004广西卷)
You can find all kinds information in just 76. __________
a few minute on the Internet. It’s like going to a 77. __________
huge library without have to walk around to find 78. __________
your books. Recently even though, many people 79. __________
have been discussing the dangers of the Internet. 80. __________
They have been reports in America about people 81. __________
trying to steal person information for bad purposes. 82. __________
Finding information on the Net is easily. But not all 83. __________
information are good to society. For example, you 84. __________
can find such information like how to kill people. 85. __________
The problem will become more serious in the future.
24
I often dream of a teacher , I dream of standing on the 76．
platform in the classroom and give lessons to lovely boys 77．
and girls . I teach them , play with them , but watch them 78．
growing up . I am always young when I was staying 79．
with them . I know there is not easy to be a teacher . You 80．
have to learn in order to teach . Without enough knowledge, 81．
you can never learn well .What is more , you have to 82．
be friends with your pupils and take good care of him . 83．
Only in this way can you be a good teacher and win 84．
respect from them . Though I am a student now , I will
work as very hard to make my dream come true . 85．
25
When I walked into the classroom, the teacher was handing
in the tests. I was feeling very nervous. I had not studied 76. _____________
at all at the weekend as I had thought it would be easy test. 77. _____________
I went through the test for many times but I could only answer 78. _____________
three out from the twenty questions. I did not want to fail 79. _____________
the exam. Then, I put my book under my desk, opening it 80. _____________
and started looking for the answer. The teacher wasn't 81. _____________
looking at me, but I copied something. Suddenly, I felt a hand 82. _____________
on my shoulder! The teacher caught me cheating. I don't 83. _____________
know what to say. Luckily, the teacher did not push for 84._____________
cheating but instead gave me a second chance. 85. _____________
26
Dear Ralph,
I’m a newcomer here of a small town. I would 76. _____
describe myself as shy and quietly. Before my classmates, 77. _____
it seems always difficult for roe to do things well as 78. _____
them. I'm sure they will laugh to me and see me as 79. _____
a fool. So I feel unhappy every day. 80. _____
Besides, I have few friends. I don't know that they 81. _____
don't like to talk with me. Sometimes, we talked to each other 82. _____
very well in class, but after class we become stranger at 83. _____
once. I am trying to improve the situation since it doesn’t 84. _____
seem to work. Can you tell me about what I should do? 85. _____
Yours,
27
On Thursday I will have to decide what I want myself 76. ________
do over a weekend. I am thinking of making a trip 77. ________
to London, and visit the British Museum and some 78. ________
parks. But I have spent lost my money, so I cannot 79. ________
even go out of town. I may go to a film, or a concert. 80. ________
Yes, a concert can be very excited. You can watch your 81. ________
stars while enjoying your favorite music. So then, a 82. ________
concert cost so much. I may just listen to music, I have 83. ________
some records giving to me as birthday gifts. If I listen 84. ________
to my own records, there are no need to spend money. 85. ________
All right. That' s what I' m going to do.
28
I still remember my middle school life in Tianjin yet . I was then 76.
in a school for students from Tibet . As we were all left home 77.
at early age , we met lots of problems in our daily life . We 78.
had to do the washing , cleaning and shopping by us . However , 79.
we seldom felt lonely or helplessly . We enjoyed our happy life . 80.
At weekends , we would play basketball , swimming in the pool 81.
or go for a picnic . We were living in a big family . We treat 82.
each other as brothers and sisters . If any one of us had any 83.
difficulty in our life and study , the other would help him out . 84.
It has been five years when we graduated , but those memories 85.
are as sweet as ever before .
29
Though great progress has been made in science these years, there 76.____
are still many people living in poor conditions. They make their lives 77.____
by collecting and selling used thing. Their children cannot go to school 78.____
because they have not enough money to send their children to there. 79.____
Why you think so many people still suffer from poverty now? 80.____
The answer lies on the population explosion. A president 81.____
of a developing country once said; “It is us who are to blame for 82.____
the poverty because we used to ‘produce’ child without limit.” 83.____
Although this few words sound simple enough, they have 84.____
clear pointed out one of the causes of the population explosion. 85.____
1
This is a story told by my father: “When I was∧ boy, 76.____ a ______
the most exciting thing
was when to celebrate the Spring
77. ___ when ___
Festival. My grandma was the best cooker in the world 78. ___ cook ___
but could make the most delicious dishes. One time, I just 79. ___ and _____
couldn’t wait for the Spring Festival dinner. As I was 80. __√______
about∧ take a piece from a cooked duck, I saw Grandma in 81. ___ to _
the kitchen looking at me. Shake her head, she said, ‘ It 82. __ Shaking _
isn't a good time to do that, dear.’ At once I apologize 83. __ apologized and controlled me at my best till the dinner started. You 84. ___ myself ___
know, that was a dinner we had waited for several month.” 85. ___ months __
2
76. important; 前加of 77. like--as 78. get 79. kinds 80. easy前加not
81. sincere 82. understanding 83. 正确 84. persueded 85. more前加the
3
76. and －but 77. woman－women 78. called前加had 79. play- playing
80． 正确 81. feel-feeling 82. how-why 83. make-makes
84.去掉the 85. sell-buy
4
76. well-good/fine/nice/ok 77.month-months 78.is—was
79.the—a 80.on 去掉 81.had ∧been
82.other—another 83.there—where 84.正确 85.but—and
5
76. 第二个you改为yourself。77. √78. languages改为language。79. or改为and。
80. subject改为subjects。81. why后加do。82. what改为that。83. much改为more。
84. go后加to。85. we’ll改为we。
6.
61. healthy--healthiest 62. √ 63. at--in 64. many--much
65. in--in the 66. this--of this 67. to--on
68. illness--illnesses 69. suggests-- advices 70. 去掉to
7改错：1.why改为how 2.try learn之间加to3.hearts改为heart4.正确
5.去掉to6.was改为have7.but改为and8.spoken改为written
9.itself改为myself10.correct改为correctly
8
9
76.specially---especially 77.give---given 78.to→on 79. 正确 80.But---And
81. 去a 82.play→playing 83. can 后加also 84.healthy---health 85.of 前加use
10(2005 安徽高考)
11．61.hoped-hope 62.in-with 63.do-are 64.have 前加 to;
65.去掉第二个to 66.√ 67.his-their 68.already前加have
69.lesson前加 a 70.carry-carrying或者把have 改为for
12 76.way后加to 77.正确 78.将soon改为well 79. 将invented改为discovered或found 80.must后加be 81. 将telephones改为telephone 82. 将for改为at 83.将is改为was 84.将from去掉 85. 将polite改为politely
13 76. fished—fish 77. hour—hours 78. instead 后面加of 79. luck—lucky 80. everything—anything 81.√ 82. empty 前加 an 83. waste 后面加of 84. real—really 85. do—doing
14 76.from-of 77.success前加 a 78.different-difference79.正确 80.that –what 81.lost-lose 82.proud-pride 83.去to 84.去with 85.succeed-succeed
15 76. greeted to改为 greeted 77. got 后加 to 78. travel改为traveling
79. are改为were 80. 正确 81. 去掉been 82. having改为had
16 76．neighbor改为 neighbors 77. same 前加 the 78. to 去掉 79. while 改为 when
80. proud 改为 proudly81. tell改为 told 82. 正确 83. said改为 saying
84. great改为 greater 85. you 改为 me
17 76.what—that 77. √ 78.in—at 79.去掉into
80. made 后加it 81 , 去掉for 82. spends—spent 83 . becoming —became
84 . full —are full 85 .society—the society
18-19
20 There are advantage for students to work while 76. __advantages
studying at school. One of them was that 77. _____is_____
they can earn money. For the most part, 78. ____√_____
students working to earn money for their own 79. __work____
use. Earning their own money allow them 80. __allows___
to spend on
anything as if they please. 81.
___ if _____
They would∧ have to ask their parents for 82. ___not____
money or for permission to do things by 83. ___with___
the money. Some
students may also to save 84. ____to____
up for our college or future use. 85. ____their__
21 76．将keep改为kept 77. 正确 78.将a改为the 79. 将himself改为him 80. 将possibly改为possible 81. 在throw前加to 82.将throwing改为thrown 83. 去掉 for 84.将were改为was 85. 将that改为what
22
My car just wouldn’t move any further .It was complete 76．_ completely__
dead,and I was a few miles far away from
anywhere on a cold, 77．__far___
wet night .I decided walk ∧around a little before accepting I’d 78．__to_____
have to spend the night in the car .Maybe I can find a 79．__could_____
telephone .Actually ,I didn’t have to walk far before I 80．____√____
found a small house standing on a field with a light 81．___in_____
shone from the sitting room .I knocked at the door and 82．__shining___
was delighting when a pleasant old man opened the 83．___delighted_
door but listened to my story carefully .He said he had 84．___and___
no telephone, and it wasn’t’ one within walking dist 85．__there___
but offered to come and look at my car.
23
24 76．being/becoming 77．giving 78．and 79．am
80．it 81．knowledge/learning 82．teach
83．them
84．√
85．as
25 76. in→out 77. easy前加an 78. 去掉for 79. from→of 80. opening→opened
81. answer→answers 82. but→so 83. don’t→didn’t 84. punish后加me 85. √
26 76. of→from 77. quietly→quiet 78. well 前加as 79. to→at 80. √
81. that→why 82. talked→talk 83. stranger→strangers 84. since→but 85. 去掉about
27 76. 划掉myself 77. 第一个a 改为the 78. visit 改为visiting
79. my前加of 80. 正确 81. excited 改为exciting
82. So改为But 83. cost改为costs 84. giving改为given
85. are改为is
28
I still remember my middle school life in Tianjin yet . I was
then
76. yet
in a school for students from Tibet . As we were all left home
77. were
at ∧early age , we met lots of problems in our daily life . We 78. an
had to do the washing , cleaning and shopping by us . However , 79. ourselves
we seldom felt lonely or helplessly . We enjoyed our happy life . 80. helpless
At weekends , we would play basketball , swimming in the pool 81. swim
or go for a picnic . We were living in a big family . We treat 82. treated
each other as brothers and sisters . If any one of us had any 83. √
difficulty in our life and study , the other would help him out . 84. others
It has been five years when we graduated , but those memories 85. since
are as sweet as ever before .
29 76正确 77 lives----living 78 thing----things 79 去掉第二个to 80 在you前加do 81 on---in 82 us---we 83 child----children 84 this----these 85 clear----clearly